Response 1
a veil so frail a pain not feigned let’s dance in trance to be without plea no one is undone by the tide inside
Response 2
ablaze through the haze the heart is the art gleaming though unseen pain is but passing rain anew the heart starts
Response 3
no now without stains and pain in the end, nothing is truly in vain
Revision
heart of gold strange boat take it easy on the road to find to feel
Region
sprawl
Material
Stone