through the mask, into a mirror we drank to tomorrow and we drink for yesterday a garden of earthly delights or a jungle of restless desire we immerse ourselves in the mess as we seek meaning we want to live, we want to give been to hollywood, been to redwood sailed on a strange boat, blown by a strange wind we feel afloat while we are ashore we may lose, and we may win though we will never be here again so we light ourselves up, in pleasure and in pain and burn, burn, burn with and under the stars
Response 1
a veil so frail a pain not feigned let’s dance in trance to be without plea no one is undone by the tide inside
Response 2
ablaze through the haze the heart is the art gleaming though unseen pain is but passing rain anew the heart starts
Response 3
no now without stains and pain in the end, nothing is truly in vain
Revision
heart of gold strange boat take it easy on the road to find to feel
Material
Stone
Region
sprawl